🥰 This is awesome! Very interesting & an excellent mystery! I hope you don’t mind me saying so- I hope you’re not offended, but I can help you with the grammar and flow.
Yes, the next part is linked at the bottom. Fire festival of kulgera. Then, it is Karma of Kulgera and last is Queen of Kulgera. It is a four part serial.
Oh yes this is quite good. I loved it.
Thank you. Happy that you loved it. I am sure you will like Jyoti too.
🥰 This is awesome! Very interesting & an excellent mystery! I hope you don’t mind me saying so- I hope you’re not offended, but I can help you with the grammar and flow.
So glad you enjoyed the piece. Hope you read the whole thing.
No, I am not offended at all. I know my work needs improvement. Thanks for your offer. I will keep your kind offer in mind whenever I need help.
I did, hope I did! Unless there’s a part 2? I really enjoyed it!
Yes, the next part is linked at the bottom. Fire festival of kulgera. Then, it is Karma of Kulgera and last is Queen of Kulgera. It is a four part serial.