Isha, this is brilliant! And what a smooth, cheeky close! Riva’s sass and Raj’s quiet charm had me grinning the whole way through. You capture the awkwardness, the unexpected spark, and the humor so well.
Thank you for your kind words, Mohika! I am so happy that this made you grin. Yes, they are one of my favorite couples too. I love writing their cute snippets in other stories of the series.
Interesting seeing the power dynamics at play between the characters. Physical and non-physical.
Glad you found it interesting!
Isha, this is brilliant! And what a smooth, cheeky close! Riva’s sass and Raj’s quiet charm had me grinning the whole way through. You capture the awkwardness, the unexpected spark, and the humor so well.
Thank you for your kind words, Mohika! I am so happy that this made you grin. Yes, they are one of my favorite couples too. I love writing their cute snippets in other stories of the series.
I love your writing style. It's so easy; it flows naturally. And I think it's a perfect story for Thorny Thursday.
Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot. I am glad you liked the story.
I like you style of writing. I'm going to watch you grow because I can see that coming. I'm going to do what I can to help you grow, too.
Thank you. I appreciate your kindness. It helps when writers feel down about their writing. I wish you well in your endeavours. We will grow together.
Thanks for reading the story and your kind words. I am glad you liked the twist.